Note: I’m a sucker for a challenge. This is Ash’s Five Word Friday challenge (to be found at: http://www.trawo.blogspot.com/) if anyone wants to join. I thought I’d try my hand at poetry…but most definitely not the happy or rhyming kind. Eerg. The words: light bulb, flower, baby, avidly, and picturesque. Hope I got it right.
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So softly;
It starts
Darkness—
A greed of the most virile sort
Stretching to
Consume and to strangle
A light! A bulb of most magnificent—
Artificiality
The gloom (so dampening)
Begins a swift ascent
By a pond, a lake most murky,
There is yet another sign—
Soft petals feather out
In undulating curves of crimson
The darkness sighs at this
Rebellion; to crush and melt away the hope
A cry! Beneath that sallow, vacant light;
Under that watchful crimson eye
A child—
A child of life in which darkness may breed
But no; there is more;
A guardian—watchful, avid, strong
Looks down upon the newborn
With eyes lit up and lips to curl with wonder
Picturesque, is it not? A scene, a hope;
To light a shadowed way
Like all the legends since;
All the tales of greatness—heroes—to rise up from the mist.
One Comment
Very nice! Layers upon layers – it took me a couple of readings to feel like I was beginning to get it. It may not be happy but it is hopeful and I would venture to say that that’s a sight better. And by all means include my blog link. The more the merrier! Thanks for joining in.